Here's what I'll do:
I'll record a 15-20 minute video walking through your deck slide by slide. No fluff. Just direct, specific feedback on:
Narrative flow — Does your story build? Is the logic clear?
Visual hierarchy — Are you guiding the eye or creating confusion?
Information density — Too much? Too little? Wrong details?
Credibility signals — Do you look like a real company or a side project?
The ask — Is it clear what you want and why now?
You'll know exactly what to fix — and in what order.
What You Get:
15-20 minute personalized video review (yours to keep)
Slide-by-slide breakdown with timestamps
Priority list: what to fix first
Delivered in 48-72 hours
Price: $350
If you decide to hire me for a full pitch deck redesign, the $350 will be credited towards your project total.